This took 4 days to cut out, I just did a few lines a night cos I've been busy during the day. It's not finished, gonna add some more emo hip hop lyrics over the top haha.
Noo I'm not feeling like this at all. Just thought the verse sounded sick in the song.
Full verse: She said I must confess it turns me on when I cut my flesh There's nothing left, I'm hollow, I'll follow death If it's a change from the mundane Mondays You know my pain, I'm empty inside, my veins pump Novocaine Sometimes I feel like life isn't real And my brain is too busy and my mind don't ever heal I could never shut it off so I'd rather shut it down Do it right the first time, I ain't trying to fuck around And she smiles for her friends but the smile is a mask Any memories of happiness are filed in the past I considered my garage foot revving on the gas A slash and a gasp or a violent blast I don't believe in Hell unless it's what I'm in I wanna free my soul, straight jump out of my skin She exhaled and sighed, eyes opened wide Suicide, it's a suicide
I kinda wanna hear this song now. Those lyrics are pretty hard-hitting for me right now. And the way you displayed them is really really cool! It's got a great impact.
great work